In which I take "An Arrow that Shoots" and transform it into a poem with an A-A-A rhyme scheme, in which the rhyme appears in the first, middle and last word of each three line stanza (each time in a different order).
Arrow shoots amid the spheres, amid The roving planets, the narrow curve of the earth. Clutches of constellations harrow The globe; in the heavenly arches, the vast Living hall, the mast of a celestial architecture has Cast before itself darkness like light; the sea is In the sky with no Mars, no Venus. Why do the black dots, impelled from the mountain trails, Proffer their bright halo, their shy Sigh, scoring the crushed earth like tumbling Stones, white as the rumbling spring of white Fumbling creeks, sprung rime of Antarctica? This corncake, hanging heavy on a stalk, This, the face of genesis, containing every face, Had it come from within or above the abyss? Out of this way station from nothing, a Creation of the only-but-all sheathe of the corn, The shadowed stones, their letters’ and words’ duration, A leap, a ship, the first kindly creature Of the sky, asleep-tumbling and spawning, Creating the fields of its habitation in the deep.
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A poem whose body was robbed from Pablo Neruda.
There in the heavens Among the roving planets, This ballista Amid the turning Spheres, An arrow That roved Now shoots before my eyes, Green. You are above Our earth’s straight rows —these stars, Constellation clutches-- Only You Are In the heavenly arches, living, The vast hall, the Darkness Like light, the brilliance Of the sky, The echoing Chorus, The sea in the sky, But nothing-- No Mars, No Venus, No sun or moon Before that celestial architecture. And so many Black dots Impelled From the mountain trails, Hollow Filled Proffering your Bright halo, Flashing, Reflecting, Perpetually intersecting, A blackness scored Like stars In the crushed earth, In the collapsing Of The Avalanche Desires, Like a tumbling stone, Wind-chime, a dull, Abraded cone. Silent Within each neighbor King released Of every river; To be White as the sprung rime Of spring antarctic To be corncake Heavy on stalk, once Infolded Cortex striving; In every face This Is the only face That contains every face Out of this Way station From nothing… It is The only but the all sheathe of the corn Amidst the shadowed stones, Its letters and words Black And leaping As if it were still A ship from the horizon, The first Kindly Creature Of the sky: tumbling, Spawning, Creating now The fields of its habitation. In which I take "There in the Heavens," based on a Pablo Neruda poem, and transform it into a series of "choka" poems.
An arrow that shoots Before my eyes, amid the Turning spheres, amid The roving planets, there in The sky, this once-green Ballista, which once had roved. You are above our Curving earth, these clutches of Constellations, only You In the heavenly Arches, living, in the vast Hall, the darkness like Light, the sea in the sky, No Mars, no Venus Before that celestial Architecture. And So many black dots impelled From the mountain trails, blackness Proferring their bright Halo, scoring, like stars, the Crushed earth, like tumbling Stones, white as the sprung rime of Antarctic spring. This Corncake hanging heavy on Stalk. This, the only Face (that contains every face) Out of this way station from Nothing, the only But the all sheathe of the corn Amidst the shadowed Stones, its letters and words black And leaping, a ship, The first kindly creature of The sky, tumbling and Spawning, creating now the Fields of its habitation. Little bird running
Across the lawn. Why? Where to? Blue with black bands on its head. The sky devours the Entire world. Mmmm, it tastes good. The blue sky remains empty. I no longer try
To fly. I can, for twenty Minutes at time. I come back, though, I Bring no one with me, I bring Back no gifts, I am Short-tempered, possessed, display No souvenirs of the trip. Today, my fear crowds
me. It fills my throat, expands In my head, presses My face like a blanket. My Heart squirms it is a Fish and it tries to flee. It Is a band tied on My temples. Look at the sky. It is a band on the east. At first, what I said
made sense. After a while, it didn’t need to make sense. All that was left was the knife and the blood and the passion. Rage, blood, the clumsy stab. It seems tawdry, but of this I wove a glory, romance and pride. |
Yaacov David Shulman
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